End of Unit One:
Being "Present" in Blogging: Online Personas, Style, and Presentation


So... Here we are, at the end of the first unit. You probably don't think that we've learned very much, at least not much that relates to the sort of skills you need to learn in a college composition classroom. Believe it or not, we *have* been practicing some very useful cognitive skills, in addition to navigating around methods of online research that may prove useful to you, not only in this class, but in your future academic and professional careers, as well.

In Unit One, we were introduced to the blogging community. We learned the basic technology for creating and maintaining our own blogs, and began to explore the "current" world of blogging through shared reading (Rebecca's Pocket, Neil Gaiman's Journal, Wil Wheaton in Exile, and Joe the Peacock's Journal) in addition to your own personal choices of blogs that have kept you informed and entertained throughout the past few weeks. By reading The Weblog Handbook, we obtained an easy vocabulary to help us locate and organize different sorts of online writing (filters, blogs, and notebooks) in addition to allowing us to better analyze the rhetorical purpose and different styles of blogs.

In addition to using this vocabulary to help us analyze other blogs, we also turned this vocabulary inward. We looked at our own blogs, contemplating our own rhetorical purposes for writing, and worked to create "online personas". We created these personas by deciding what we wanted to write about, what our major purpose in updating our journals would be (self-expression, building reputation, or providing information) and even by creating LiveJournal user icons to represent ourselves visually. We've learned the importance of unity in our blogs, but we've also learned the value of flexibility, and we are learning to balance writing for an audience with writing for ourselves.

By reading Mentally Incontinent we were able to see how the interactive experience of writing online is directly affecting the production and style of literature, and we were able to discuss the writing process directly with Joe the Peacock in an online interview via AOL Instant Messenger. We were able to learn through Joe Peacock's blog and comments the positive and negative impacts of writing directly for an audience -- and by continually maintaining our own personal blogs, we've been able to experience some of those positive and negative effects first-hand!

Believe it or not, throughout this unit, each of you has become an active participant in the "blogosphere". Congratulations!

Grammar Review:

Of course, it can't all be fun and games all of the time. Overall, our general sense of grammar and formatting seems to be fairly on-the-mark, but I have noticed a great deal of comma errors throughout our blog entries. Before we start composing our End of Unit Assignments, perhaps it would be helpful to review some basic comma rules.

The Purdue University Online Writing Lab has perhaps the best list of comma rules available on the Web. Please follow the link and review the rules. Then try your hand at one of the exercises (Exercise #1, Exercise #2, Exercise #3, Exercise #4, or Exercise #5) and comment to my entry on the LiveJournal class blog with which exercise you did and how many you got correct.

End of Unit Blog Assignment:

Please choose one of the following prompts for your End of Unit One Blog Assignment:
  1. Conduct an interview with a blogger! Choose one of the individuals that write and/or contribute to a blog that you have been reading throughout this unit to interview. Create a list of interview questions based on the same criteria we used in class to compose the questions for Joe the Peacock. Conduct an interview via email or a chat program with the blogger you've chosen, and then write a report of the information you've gathered, including any conclusions you can make about the writing process, the purpose of blogging, etc.
  2. Do a thorough critical and rhetorical analysis of a blog using any combination of the criteria set forth by Rebecca Blood and the Evaluating Online Resources handout from class. Your "essay" will need to be an argument on the effectiveness of the blog you are analyzing (i.e. "This blog is effective due to its use of x, y, and z" or "This blog could be more effective if it used x, y, and z." Remember to use Rebecca Blood's terminology (notebook, blog, filter) to help in your description!
  3. Explain some of the beneficial and/or non-beneficial effects that maintaining a weblog seems to have on writing style. Think not only about the actual format of writing, but also how writing for an audience may influence the writing process. How has maintaining a weblog influenced your own writing style during these past few weeks? How might these writing skills assist you either personally or professionally in the future?
These End of Unit Assignments need to be at least 600 words and will be graded as "formal" assignments -- grammar, spelling, capitalization, etc. will be graded! Since these are, in essence, small essays, you will want to have an introduction with a thesis statement as well as a conclusion, in addition to specific examples which support your argument. Please feel free to message me and/or email me with any questions about this assignment! Please post the End of Unit Blog Assignment to the class blog no later than Thursday, February 21st!

Have a great weekend, and I will see you all in class on Tuesday! Remember that we will be meeting in our regular classroom in Estabrook!


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